Writing

=This is Jacob and My Fractured Fairy Tale.= ==We has to take four characters out of different Fairy Tales the we had to write a story about them. Then we had to get into peers and the other person had to give us Three pieces of feed back. This is the story, hope you like it.==

 **Rapunzel** **,** **The** **Three** **Little** **Pigs**  **And** **The** **Big** **Bad** **Wolf.**

 **One frosty year a wild west wolf and the three lovely pigs and one girl called Rapunzel. One lovely evening Rapunzel decided to go for a little walk to go see the three little pigs.**

 **Back then, most people had to ask for permission if they could go outside but Rapunzel didn’t have to ask because she was the Princess.When she left Rapunzel skipped off into the woods and on the way she was just saying continuously la la la la la la la. All of a sudden she herd a wolf sound and she got so creped out she ran behind the tree just outside the Three Little Pigs half straw and half bamboo house. She ran into the bamboo side and got knocked out and when she woke up the three little pigs had found her and taken her inside to give her some medicine. Then she had a big bruise on the back of her leg so she had to go to the doctors because the bruise was bleeding inside and she got really scared. While she was at the doctors they told her to go home so she did. But instead she went to her dads dairy to get some lollies, well lollies that were old because they couldn’t afford any of the nice ones but Rapunzel didn’t mind. When she was on her way home the woods seemed to get darker and darker the longer she walked on so she turned around and WOW! a big,enormous balloon was just a bout to blow up but then she seen a little figures lying in the balloon and guess who it was. It was the three little pigs trying their hardest to stop it popping but “BANG” it popped so they had to go to hospital but o well they will live. So Rapunzel carried on walking back to the house then she looked to her left and then her house was there. She was so excited she finally found it.**

 **When the three little pigs come back from the hospital one had a broken arm, another had a fractured arm and the last one had a broken finger, so they were resting at home for a we wile so Rapunzel decided to stay with them.**

 **All of a sudden they heard, “I’ll huff and I'll puff and I will blow your house down.” He got down half of the house when the started to chase him away and he was so scared he wet his pants. Once the big bad wolf had gone Rapunzel sat down with the three little pig and they enjoyed a nice cup of tea in front of the half fire.**

 **Then they lived Happy ever after.**

<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14pt; font-style: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;"> **By Jayden and Jacob.**

<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #ff0000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14pt; font-style: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">**Harry (Mario): I liked it i thought it was great i especially liked it how the characters got hurt.**

<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #ff0000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14pt; font-style: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;"> **I liked it how you mucked things up it was totally different.**

<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #ff0000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14pt; font-style: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;"> **My favourite part was when she wet her pants.**

** Monday 31st October 2011 **

<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #0000ff; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14pt; font-style: normal; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">**Today we looked up on the internet for a ballad and we had to compare our ballad that we found to the ballad called The death of Ben Hall. Then we had to find a picture that was related to the balled that we found. This is mine.**

== = = = Friday 4th November 2011 = = = = Today we made up our own cinquain poem which is a poem with five line and we done our cinquain poems on life. Here is my cinquain poem =